TLC by Chrouya
Script:	 Hentai Ouji 10 [tl][timed_v2][edit]
Workraw: Hentai Ouji 10 [WR]

12
Here, have some lemons preserved in honey.
Here, have some lemons in honey.
{more colloquial speech}

20
Nix that, if you are a pervert, bang that into her head.
Scratch that, if you are a pervert, bang that into her head.
{I don't think nix that and scratch that are the same}

27
The vice-captain suffers from an incurable disease that causes her to say the opposite of what she feels. {tlc - genzai here means now or...?}
The vice-captain suffers from a recent incurable disease that causes her to say the opposite of what she feels.
{gendai is indeed of the context of right now, so you can think of it as a recently active disease}

28
She's a tsundere!
In other words, she's a tsundere!
{liberalized by adding words for context}
{just a suggestion, might be too long}

39
{\i0}And here is another person I'm worried about.{\i1}
{\i0}And here the other person I'm worried about.{\i1}

48
Nope. Never mind.
Oh, never mind.
{sounds a bit awkward}

68
Can't the two of you get along better?
Can't the two of you get along a bit better for my sake?
{watashi no iyoku: By my desire, literally}

72
Retire from life right now!
Retire from life while you're at it!
{~as well~ fit into the sentence}

78
It's a time-honored game that Tsukiko and I made.
It's a time-honored Japanese game that Tsukiko and I made.
{I missed Yamato == (ancient) Japan}

80
The board's orders are absolute. We call it the king's dice game.
As the board's orders are absolute, we refer to it as the King's Dice Game.
{Just like King's Game is usually in capitals due to it being a name, the dice version might as well be called like this}

95
Go back four spaces and practice writing kanji from hiragana.
Go back four spaces and start kanji dictation practice.
{usually you write kanji from katakana, actually.}
{kakitori is a dictation}

96
Go back five spaces and recite your timetables.
Go back five spaces and recite your times tables.
{a timetable is not the same as a times (or multiplication} table}

106
I'm the longest. Yes. I have the advantage.
I've known you the longest. Yes. I have the advantage.
{She's really fixed on the point where she knows Youto more than anyone else}

121
"Project Get Closer", codenamed Project NKK,
Project "Slowly Getting Closer", codenamed Project SGC,
{nonbiri tonari ni chikazuku project: "Carefreely getting closer to you" project}
{in Japanese, chi is written as "ti" in romaji, which makes the project abbreviation actually "NTT" (Nippon Telegraph and Telephone? xD)}

259
Tsukimi Nursery (Can just leave it as "Nur" since the entire name is not seen and I'm not 100% sure it's "Nursery") [Same as Epi 7]
Tsukimi Nursery 
{that is definitely Nursery. I can see the top radical of the second kanji of hoikuen (保育園)}

297
Maybe true love? Or my first experience? {tlc - seems short, am i missing something?}
For example, maybe true love? Or maybe my first experience?
{you can lengthen the first sentence like this}